
I think the editing to which I have completed so far has achieved the right emotion and an appropriate balance of rhythem with it also. Certainly it could still do with some improvement to it, to which I will be doing later on. These improvements would include adding more shot reverse shots in it between the mother, daughter, and what I assume to be the husband, or partner. This would add to the tension that is there between the three characters, and I think it would improve the tempo of the edit.
In terms of the sound I have used, I have only really put in dialogue, with the occasional extra sounds that are there in the background. At this moment in time I haven't had a chance to experiment with it much, nor have I looked to see if there are other possible sounds to include. This is also something I will look to improve on.