Here is the latest screenshot of the edit I have been doing. It is supposed to be a maximum of 10 minutes long, but at the moment it is over that so I am having to continue to cut it down.
A lot more has been added, including music to give the piece a lot more feel, and there has been a lot more cutaways used. These give the piece a much better rhythm to it and it is really coming along considerably. Now I am just awaiting the voiceovers that will be used to introduce each new part to the documentary. Once I have these, it will start to gel together as a whole and I will be able to see the outline of the final product.

The final thing to think about is how I am going to conclude this piece. Obviously I am pushed for room to fit new things in as I am already over 10 minutes at the moment, so maybe I might use the positive things that the public have said at the end, in a sort of montage way. Another idea was to get the narrator to be interviewed himself, whereby he would sum up everything that we have found out. The style of this would be so that he is talking to someone just to the side of the camera, but you will never hear their voice. However I have not decided on this as of yet, and with the deadline being pushed back a week, I have plenty of time to decide.