Feedback from session

Generally it was thought that the dialogue controlled the flow of the piece. However the dialogue seemed non-stop throughout and that a break was needed to give some kind of feel to the images that are being displayed. For the most part there didn't seem to be much feeling between the two characters as most of the focus was on the cannibal character. To improve it I will slow down the pace of it by including some different shots and by removing some of the narration.