Night Journey so far

This screenshot shows my progress so far, and currently I am just over 3 and a half minutes in. It has been challenging, yet very enjoyable.

The shot displayed in the right hand viewer is one that I really liked and decided to include. I think it sets the scene as I intended it to, and with the sound over the top of it I think it works really well.





During the editing I noticed a few continuity problems. For instance in this shot, there is no newspaper present next to the man on the left, yet in the script it says to include a close up of him holding one. If I included it however, this shot would not work because there isn't a newspaper present. Therefore I scrapped the close up shot of the newspaper completelty.






Further on in the editing I required the use of this shot to show the narrator leaving his seat. As can be seen, the newspaper causes another slight problem as in this shot it is visible. I decided to stick with the shot because first of all it is essential to show that he has left. Secondly I don't think it is too much of a problem that it wasn't there before hand because it could look as if he has only just put it in viewing of the audience because he has reached the point where he needs to gather his belongings as he is leaving.